Woah, Frank, you completely got what I was seeking to articulate and that is such a good feeling... not only that, but it's wonderful how you are reflecting the meanings I was struggling ot convey... and wasn't sure if I had.

Yes, the scattered, disjointed nature of the lines and verses, is to give express to that consciousness which is so...

The heart of the matter is indeed the emotional immaturity of the parents that has such severe consequences concerning their offspring...

And you also totally understood my reservations about therapy...

And indeed, your second paragraph is reflecting my sense of resolution concerning all these relationships which have taken a lot from me!

I feel honoured that you brought your wisdom and life experience to engage with this poem. Maybe this is the best feeling a reader can give to a writer, especially when they have never even met one another !

Bless !

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