Aza Y. Alam
Dec 6, 2022

--

Also, while you are correct in saying there are people who come to Medium for simple entertainment, there are also those who come for in depth analysis provided by say.... Richard Crim who writes in your field of expertise.

Notice how he conveys complex facts, provides a critique, justified by numerous graphs, and he also expresses his emotion but in ways that are all very clear.

Instead of sitting on the high horse of a greater intellect it would be better to improve your communicative style. I had to reread your sentences not because of any complexity in content but because of your unusual (speaking politely) English grammar. Speaking as an editor of English language learning textbooks, perhaps you could consider getting some editorial support?

--

--

Aza Y. Alam
Aza Y. Alam

Written by Aza Y. Alam

Exploring the entanglements of gender, race and class during this era of the Eurokleptocene. Let’s do better, one story, one learning, one comment at a time.

No responses yet